Caity has just received her first kitten and it has had the added benefit of sparking her imagination. She has written her first installment of Sarafina's Adventures. She is very excited about it and has already thought of many adventures incorporating our pet family in every journey. I, for one, hope that her enthusiasm continues. Writing is not her favorite thing with all the rules. Enjoy!
Once upon a time there was a girl named Ro. She had three cats and one dog but wanted another kitten. After her vacation, she got her wish and named her kitty Sarafina Fluff. After some days, Sarafina started to get used to the room and found a way to get to the pool that was down the stairs. She had to pass the cats, but she did not have to worry about the dog named Franky.
When Sarafina got to the backyard she looked for the kitty pool. When she got inside there was a door, so she opened the door. On a rock was seaweed and Sarafina ate the whole thing. Right there was stairs. Bravely, she got on the stairs going down. Sarafina didn't know that the seaweed would make her go under the water. When she was in the water she said, " I want to go home."
Two mermaids came from the bushes when they heard her. The two girls names were Ariel and Olive. "Nice to meet you," said the girls.
"Can you help me? I'm lost," cried Sarafina. Ariel knew there was a map in the Cave of Wonders. After Sarafina found it, she took a picture with Olive and Ariel. She told them that she would keep them in her heart. As she was on her way home she made a hole in the Cave of wonders to keep her special adventure pictures.
5 comments:
A new kitty? Wow! What a wonderful story. I've been waiting patiently for you to post another story. I look forward to the next adventure.
All my love,
Mamma W
Caity,
You really have a gift for writing. I look forward to reading about more adventures of Sarafina. I love to see you use your imagination. Keep up the good work!
Papa White
Dear Miss Rose,
Thank you for following through with the "Adventures of Sarafina"! I was so excited to read your first story of adventures for your sweet new kitten. And look foward to many more! I really liked the part about the mermaids coming to help her and especially loved the part about the Cave of Wonders to keep her adventure pictures. Really good stuff, my dear!
Love, Mamma Tinez
Hey Boo,
I loved your story. My favorite part was when the two mermaids came to help Sarafina to help her.
Keep writing sweet!
Daddy
Rose,
I loved reading your story! It was very creative and fun! Sarafina sounds like a great kitty, and a fun pet to have. I'm very excited to read more adventures about her! You're a fantastic writer and storyteller.
Love,
Holly
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